IllinoisArcher Posted April 2, 2006 Report Share Posted April 2, 2006 many of you dont know this but i TRY to write poetry here is some that i have came up with Everyday Everyday I wake , everyday I Take, Take a step to follow the path of good or evil, Everyday hoping and praying, for that one day. the day of hope and love will fill us all, The day I open my wings. Share my love and Heart to The World, To a World of sadness and without love. This night "The nights when i walk alone with street cars passing by every other minute I look down the road and see the street lights and the spring air blowing from time to time, Walking and thinking about the ones I love and looking up at the starry night Walking and wondering what my purpose is searching and wondering the Truth, As I walk up the north Hill and up at the top looking and watching the night In the town were i call home. Saying to my self ..its time.." Never Gone Alwaysed Loved The One someone soo special can be someone next to you they make you feel like your the one this girl can be the one you love for a lifetime Lifetime of happeniss and Love. For when I leave this and search on my own I take a look back of what could of been The one always beautiful no matter what they do always the one that shows you the truth Take time to think about the one for you cause in time they will come back to you I Love you As i lay on the sand As I lay all alone on the sand, blood running down my chest thinking of the good times that i had on this world nothing could replace of what i have become and what i will become The air moves softly with every breath that i take, hear the birds, the fly that buzzes by, time and time again. Thinking about the love that people gave me and The Love that i gave them. as it gets cold with every passing minute every passing hour, Holding on try to stay alive. Night falls, cant hear the birds nor the fly buzzing , everything is still, calm, the sea stops , time has stopped. I hear a voice, A voice i never herd before. calming yet beautiful. Tells me that everything will be alright not to worry. All the people i love all the people who i care about Not knowing who they are or what they do. That time goes and goes. The love of caring and the love I have for people IS TIMELESS. As I lay on the sand Saving a Life Of someone who cares beautiful When I close my eyes all I see is you Always smiling always happy When im with you I feel like this is what life is all about, When I close my eyes your there always happy never sad When I sleep I dream of you, When I sing I sing about you, Even though we just met It seems Ive known you for a life time Your beautiful Always and forever Your Name I WROTE UR NAME ON A PiECE OF PAPER BUT BY ACCiDENT i THREW iT AWAYY. i WROTE UR NAME ON MY HAND BUT iT WASHED AWAYY. i WROTE UR NAME iN THE SAND BUT THE WAVES WHiSPERED iT AWAY. i WROTE UR NAME iN MY HEART AND FOREVER iT WiLL STAY ok i dont think its that great but its something what do u think and be honest Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Steven Posted April 2, 2006 Report Share Posted April 2, 2006 Re: poetry Pretty good. I write too. Not nearly as much as I used to, but every now and again the words will hit me. I use a much different style than you usually. I always fancied myself a song writer, so the rhythm and meter have to be spot on with a strong rhyme scheme for me to be happy. Mine is much more rigid and mechanical while yours is more free verse, which I respect. I couldn't write a free verse if my life depended on it. Keep it up! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
buckee Posted April 2, 2006 Report Share Posted April 2, 2006 Re: poetry I've written a bit of poetry also. Like Racksie, I try to keep mine structured. Your poetry is pretty deep Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stevebeilgard Posted April 3, 2006 Report Share Posted April 3, 2006 Re: poetry good stuff. i can't do that. do that, and lots more Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mandyjo62 Posted April 3, 2006 Report Share Posted April 3, 2006 Re: poetry i write some too, but it always ends up dark, depressing, creepy, or otherwise messed up.... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LifeNRA Posted April 3, 2006 Report Share Posted April 3, 2006 Re: poetry [ QUOTE ] Everyday Everyday I wake , everyday I Take, Take a step to follow the path of good or evil, Everyday hoping and praying, for that one day. the day of hope and love will fill us all, The day I open my wings. Share my love and Heart to The World, To a World of sadness and without love. [/ QUOTE ] Remember this one while your playing 25 to Life! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wtnhunt Posted April 3, 2006 Report Share Posted April 3, 2006 Re: poetry Those are pretty good. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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