hunting_boy Posted March 10, 2007 Report Share Posted March 10, 2007 i was wondering ifn u all wanted to write a story with me u guys tell me diffrent things and i will put them togather to make a story but it will have to be a hunting story and when im finished i will post it i will have some of my freinds help me out with it but what do u all say? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hunting_boy Posted March 10, 2007 Author Report Share Posted March 10, 2007 Re: question for everyone come one no one want to help darn Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TreeStandBowHunter Posted March 10, 2007 Report Share Posted March 10, 2007 Re: question for everyone I think maybe if you re-write your post so we can understand it, maybe someone would help you. I am having trouble figuring out what you want Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Born2Hunt Posted March 10, 2007 Report Share Posted March 10, 2007 Re: question for everyone I could not take a 5 page run on sentence. Sorry bud. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hunting_boy Posted March 10, 2007 Author Report Share Posted March 10, 2007 Re: question for everyone well i said will everyone help me make a good story and i wont be doing it all just a little Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Exturkinator Posted March 10, 2007 Report Share Posted March 10, 2007 Re: question for everyone well i said that um tominator can maybe like help you look up the term punctuation in the dictionary it will help all the kind folks understand exactly what your chicken scratch is supposed to mean i mean its like trying to read heiroglyphics - i want to holler out to the world "hey somebody fetch my prosetta stone"... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest WVstrutter Posted March 10, 2007 Report Share Posted March 10, 2007 Re: question for everyone you got a story to write for school work don't ya Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tominator Posted March 10, 2007 Report Share Posted March 10, 2007 Re: question for everyone I think I'd have to charge you. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BowtechTurkeyHunter Posted March 10, 2007 Report Share Posted March 10, 2007 Re: question for everyone Id guess from some of the responces here ... it would be a "NO" lol Steve Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AJ Posted March 10, 2007 Report Share Posted March 10, 2007 Re: question for everyone nopedontthinkicouldtakethatmuchpainreadingamultipagerunon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LifeNRA Posted March 10, 2007 Report Share Posted March 10, 2007 Re: question for everyone [ QUOTE ] you got a story to write for school work don't ya [/ QUOTE ] Thats what I was thinking! Is this for school? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TreeStandBowHunter Posted March 11, 2007 Report Share Posted March 11, 2007 Re: question for everyone Geeze people, at least I was trying to be nice Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Loves_To_Hunt458 Posted March 11, 2007 Report Share Posted March 11, 2007 Re: question for everyone What would the story all be about and how would it be put together? MAYBE I'll help Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
whitetailkiller Posted March 11, 2007 Report Share Posted March 11, 2007 Re: question for everyone [ QUOTE ] nopedontthinkicouldtakethatmuchpainreadingamultipagerunon [/ QUOTE ] too funny ... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ryan1990 Posted March 11, 2007 Report Share Posted March 11, 2007 Re: question for everyone You guys need to be a little nicer. He was just asking your help. Maybe he wanted to write a story cuz it might be fun. If you dont wanna help him dont post. No need to be a jerk about it and put him down. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hunting_boy Posted March 11, 2007 Author Report Share Posted March 11, 2007 Re: question for everyone thanks ryan im bored and i have alot of time for the next couple of weeks so i wanted to write a story no if it was for school then i whould have do it at school Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Loves_To_Hunt458 Posted March 11, 2007 Report Share Posted March 11, 2007 Re: question for everyone Do you have any certain ideas for your story and or any format??? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hunting_boy Posted March 11, 2007 Author Report Share Posted March 11, 2007 Re: question for everyone well i want it to be about a deer hunt.... but im not sure where it is takeing place at and yea thats about all i got Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
huntinguide Posted March 11, 2007 Report Share Posted March 11, 2007 Re: question for everyone [ QUOTE ] nopedontthinkicouldtakethatmuchpainreadingamultipagerunon [/ QUOTE ] i just wet myself Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest lovinbowhuntin247365 Posted March 11, 2007 Report Share Posted March 11, 2007 Re: question for everyone jeez, you guys are horrible ... im sure you guys all wrote sentences like that when you were young too, so dont put down the little guy just cuz he cant type like a pro. give us some ideas, and maybe we could cook somethin up Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
unioncountyslayer Posted March 11, 2007 Report Share Posted March 11, 2007 Re: question for everyone Opening sentence, "Yeah, we were at the place, you know the one, and we saw a biggun, and what not and he looked like that other one that was at the other place but now he was here and probably the same one we saw at the place before that and that is where this story begins you know what I'm saying?" Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
popgun Posted March 11, 2007 Report Share Posted March 11, 2007 Re: question for everyone [ QUOTE ] jeez, you guys are horrible ... im sure you guys all wrote sentences like that when you were young too, so dont put down the little guy just cuz he cant type like a pro. give us some ideas, and maybe we could cook somethin up [/ QUOTE ] The little guy, hunting_boy Looks like a pretty good size young man to me. I say "Do your own homework." Believe me; your teacher can tell what is your work, and what is plagiarized from someone else. ....popgun Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dg Posted March 11, 2007 Report Share Posted March 11, 2007 Re: question for everyone Uh, try periods to start with and then....................maybe we can talk. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
buckee Posted March 11, 2007 Report Share Posted March 11, 2007 Re: question for everyone OK guys, this is getting a bit carried away. I'm sure we can all appreciate good writing skills, but the bashing has to stop,,,please Let's stick to the original question OK [ QUOTE ] I was wondering if you all wanted to write a story with me. You guys tell me different things and I will put them together to make a story, but, it will have to be a hunting story. When I'm finished, I will post it. I will have some of my friends help me out with it too. What do u all say? [/ QUOTE ] Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dg Posted March 11, 2007 Report Share Posted March 11, 2007 Re: question for everyone [ QUOTE ] jeez, you guys are horrible ... im sure you guys all wrote sentences like that when you were young too, so dont put down the little guy just cuz he cant type like a pro. give us some ideas, and maybe we could cook somethin up [/ QUOTE ] It's called honest feedback. You sound like those parents that comfort and pat a child on the back for any smidge of input. That's why they can't handle REAL feedback. Some days you are the hydrant, some days you are the dog. BELIEVE IT OR NOT, THERE IS BENEFIT FROM HONESTY (I.E. TELLING IT LIKE IT IS.) I learned how to write reports from someone who told the truth on HOW BAD I was, not someone who stroked my ego and tried to keep thinking I was doing okay. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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