IllinoisArcher Posted March 5, 2008 Report Share Posted March 5, 2008 I wrote this poem 2 years ago on 9/11 for a school project and after the where were you thread that started i figured i would post it... America the Beautiful America the Great If this is all so true, Why was this our fate? The echoed screams, The billowing smoke, The everlasting tears, The words that will never lie. Why did our loved ones have to die? Why, why, why? We miss you And even though you're gone, We love you. You didn't deserve to die, But maybe someday this pointless war Will come to an end. And you can rest in peace. Maybe some other countries claim "They deserved it" But for us, this is ****. Until this is over- Wish us luck, And watch over your family and friends As these bombings and shootings Bring American closer together In heart: The USA Won't be split apart. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
aksheephuntress Posted March 5, 2008 Report Share Posted March 5, 2008 ...Thankyou for posting your poem. ....I can't help it, I just have to ask.........why would a nice boy like you want to get their nipples pierced??! ...I'm sorry...every time you post something I can't get that crazy idea you had out of my mind. ....Write more poetry-it has more substance, and girls like that more than that other.... Thankyou for sharing your 9-11 poem . You should always keep a copy of it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bowtech_archer07 Posted March 5, 2008 Report Share Posted March 5, 2008 That's very good Illinois.. thanks for posting Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stevebeilgard Posted March 5, 2008 Report Share Posted March 5, 2008 good poem Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
beagleboy Posted March 5, 2008 Report Share Posted March 5, 2008 That poem hits home. Awesome Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DU_man_84 Posted March 5, 2008 Report Share Posted March 5, 2008 you did a great job on the poem, it means alot Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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