Dakota Posted April 22, 2009 Report Share Posted April 22, 2009 (edited) I'm having problems with a very liberal teacher who is trying to show us the benefits of Marxism, Socialism and Communism and to think independently of a Christian worldview...at a private Christian university...imagine that! Anyways, here is a paper I wrote on freedom, basically telling him I'm not hoodwinked like the others under his brainwashing. Does this pretty much sum up what is going on? Hope you like it! Dakota Dakota W. Case 4/18/2009 WIT 112 Dr. Kevin Cole Big Government: Like a Monarchy, but with a Congress! Big Government: exactly what the Pilgrims and Colonists fled when they sailed across the Atlantic to make a new life for themselves in the New World during the 1600s and 1700s. What they sought is directly opposite of what America and her Federal Government has become today. This is to say, government has too much freedom and the American people don’t have enough. America’s secular society has made us into a nation that is too “politically correct”; too careful to appease certain groups of people--homosexuals, transsexuals and others who choose to victimize themselves by leading their perverted lifestyles and wanting to force it upon an overwhelming majority against such a thing (I’ll probably get sued under an alleged “hate speech” violation for stating the facts, that’s how far gone we already are)--and give them favored status when, according to our Constitution, all men are created equal (when one group gets special treatment, other groups will want the same and, when everyone is special, no one will be and we will be back where we started: morally bankrupt as a whole); too focused on being like everyone else (popularity, looks etc…) and not the unique individuals made in God’s image that we are; too careless with our hard earned money, our financial freedom—which we, and the following ten generations after us, now owe to the government thanks to poor management on the part of a liberal congress, not the former President as all liberals would like you to believe--and too quick to rely on the government, whom we employ, to solve all our problems. As such, all we have done is set ourselves up for failure. These are just a few of the many major problems we have created for ourselves that open the door for Federal government spending and creating or proposing legislation such as Roe v. Wade, legalizing abortion; the Federal Assault Weapons Ban, a federal law--now defunct—of the U.S. signed into law by former President Bill Clinton that included a prohibition on the sale to civilians of certain semi-automatic so called "assault weapons" including military-style semiautomatic rifles, derived from assault rifles but with lesser capabilities; gay marriage, though currently prohibited at the Federal level in The Defense of Marriage Act, state legislators are slowly succumbing to liberal brainwashing and one after another states are legalizing this travesty that undermines the fundamental principles this nation was founded on. Taxation is another big issue, depending on one’s income, income tax alone can range from zero to 35% of your total income; President Barack Obama would like to see that raised to 40%. If our Founding Fathers were here they would see that we have come full circle from taxation without representation to taxation without deliberation in order to mop up the mess Congress created after being elected in 2006. While the colonists were oppressed by English tyranny and eventually threw off the yoke of oppression, they still maintained their hope and faith in God and enacted it throughout the fledgling American Republic—which most people mistakenly claim is a Democracy— government system, as written by the collective authors of Streams of Civilization: There can be little doubt that Puritanism, the religion of the early settlers and the rationale for their very arrival on American shores, left a lasting legacy which carried on into the late eighteenth century birth of the nation. Puritanism emphasized principles which can be seen in the American political development-voluntary association, limits on power, a necessity for civic involvement by the saints, and a careful delineation of the realms of the church and state. The heart of the Puritan system was the idea of covenant, initiated by God and concerned both with individual salvation and the creation of a people (or society). Puritanism also emphasized the rule of fundamental laws that harmonized with the Bible. - Streams of Civilization 2.5 Our nation did not revolt from England because of mere taxation, however. We sought the freedom to worship God in our own way, whether Baptist or Methodist, Catholic or Protestant, not under the rule and dominion of the crown. At the center of the revolution was God and the principles of the Reformation. Our nation’s leaders were men of God and patriotic countrymen who sought His wisdom and guidance in all things and were not afraid to stand up for what was right. It is time our nation’s men and women did the same and stand up for God and the nation which was originally founded under His guidance. In today’s society, “One nation under God” and “In God we trust”, have become nothing more than religious “dogma” that has become “old”, “outdated” and little more than a ridiculous tradition. And this is understandable if a person does not look through the lens of a Christian worldview, because then the basic moral principles that form the back bone of our nation’s laws and regulations which are based on the moral code God dictated His people to follow doesn’t appear to “apply” to them. Such a code doesn’t make sense to a non-religious person because it differs from their way of thinking. President Obama understands both views and that is why he has declared that we are not a “Christian Nation” to the outrage of many in America. If one thinks along those same lines, abortion, homosexuality and gay marriage, embryonic stem cell research and the “humane” and “ethical” euthanasia of the terminally ill and elderly seem appropriate and quite acceptable. Welcome to the Nazi/Fascist/Socialist/Communist dictator way of thinking; the end justifies the means. Francis A. Schaeffer, author of How Should We Then Live?, states, As we consider the coming of an elite, an authoritarian state, to fill the vacuum left by the loss of Christian principles, we must not think naively of the models of Stalin and Hitler. We must think rather of a manipulative authoritarian government. Modern governments have forms of manipulation at their disposal which the world has never known before. - Francis A. Schaefer, How Should We Then Live? Ch. 12 Sound familiar? Such manipulation can be seen not only in the current administration, but in past elections such as Johnson vs. Goldwater where LBJ was able to twist the media to his whims; of course, he learned from the best having been Vice President to President Kennedy before his assassination. I think it best to end with an excerpt from Sounding Forth the Trumpet, by authors Peter Marshall and David Manuel, recounting the assault on Mexico City during the Mexican-American War. The following is a quote by Captain Kirby Smith, Fatal credulity! How awful are its consequences to us…and now, alas, we have all our fighting to do all over again. - Peter Marshall and David Manuel, Sounding Forth the Trumpet Chapter 21 If we don’t stand up for our rapidly disappearing freedoms and take a stand against the Federal Government, we will have lost all our predecessors fought so hard for. Do you think they will appreciate that? I didn’t think so either. Hope this helps a little bit. 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Gator Posted April 22, 2009 Report Share Posted April 22, 2009 I don't know, I can't read it!!!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hoythunter37 Posted April 22, 2009 Report Share Posted April 22, 2009 WOW that was a pretty good paper man. To be honest you may have been a little too honest with your teacher. Don’t get me wrong I am all about voicing opinions and everything. But with the way you said your teacher was I hope he doesn’t go against you and tear up your paper. I hope he can read a different opinion and be fine with it, but I know with some of my teachers they can be a little overwhelmed with their opinions and not consider yours. If ya know what I mean. And Awesome paper man. Sounds like you are right on track bud!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wtnhunt Posted April 22, 2009 Report Share Posted April 22, 2009 Looks kind of long for a summation. Going to have to come back and read that later on Dakota. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Texan_Til_I_Die Posted April 22, 2009 Report Share Posted April 22, 2009 I foresee an F in your future young man. Not because the paper is poorly written, but because the content will be anathema to a liberal professor. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jorden Posted April 22, 2009 Report Share Posted April 22, 2009 It is a really good paper Dakota, but like the others said your teacher may not like it. If it were me, I would turn it in as is. You need to stand up for what you believe in and let your voice be heard. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gzilla45 Posted April 22, 2009 Report Share Posted April 22, 2009 I'll give ya an A for it. It's a great paper and you should be proud that you voiced your opinion even though your professor probably will disagree. Be proud of the fact that we live in a country where you can voice a different opinion. If the professor does give you a bad grade because he doesn't agree with it, so what. It took a lot of character to go against him so professionally and that is more important in life than any grade he'll give you. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hoosierbuck Posted April 22, 2009 Report Share Posted April 22, 2009 (edited) Okay-the points are good, but your writing style is really hard to follow-too many of these-followed by more of this; and one of those thrown in. Try to write in sentences and paragraphs. Try to be succinct, and make one point in a sentence or two, then move one and do it again with a new point. Generally, rhetorical questions are not well-favored, either. I don't mean to try to come off snotty or put you down, but seriously...it's hard to read it. It is a college paper and not a blog entry. I had to change my writing style at one point in my schooling, also, so I can empathize with you. Apply those thoughts to this "sentence": America’s secular society has made us into a nation that is too “politically correct”; too careful to appease certain groups of people--homosexuals, transsexuals and others who choose to victimize themselves by leading their perverted lifestyles and wanting to force it upon an overwhelming majority against such a thing (I’ll probably get sued under an alleged “hate speech” violation for stating the facts, that’s how far gone we already are)--and give them favored status when, according to our Constitution, all men are created equal (when one group gets special treatment, other groups will want the same and, when everyone is special, no one will be and we will be back where we started: morally bankrupt as a whole); too focused on being like everyone else (popularity, looks etc…) and not the unique individuals made in God’s image that we are; too careless with our hard earned money, our financial freedom—which we, and the following ten generations after us, now owe to the government thanks to poor management on the part of a liberal congress, not the former President as all liberals would like you to believe--and too quick to rely on the government, whom we employ, to solve all our problems. See what I mean? Break that bad boy down and don't lose your salient points in the sheer volume of words. HB Edited April 22, 2009 by Hoosierbuck Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dakota Posted April 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 22, 2009 Okay-the points are good, but your writing style is really hard to follow-too many of these-followed by more of this; and one of those thrown in. Try to write in sentences and paragraphs. Try to be succinct, and make one point in a sentence or two, then move one and do it again with a new point. Generally, rhetorical questions are not well-favored, either. I don't mean to try to come off snotty or put you down, but seriously...it's hard to read it. It is a college paper and not a blog entry. I had to change my writing style at one point in my schooling, also, so I can empathize with you. HB lol :D:D No hard feelings, and btw that is not the format it is actually in. It just shows up that way when you copy and paste it on the forums. Don't worry, it will be in proper form when I turn it in. Dakota Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hoosierbuck Posted April 22, 2009 Report Share Posted April 22, 2009 lol :D:D No hard feelings, and btw that is not the format it is actually in. It just shows up that way when you copy and paste it on the forums. Don't worry, it will be in proper form when I turn it in. Dakota \ Good deal. You know how you ask your friends before you go out, "How do I look?" I am the one friend who will tell you that you have mustard smeared on the seat of your pants. It isn't always what you want to hear, but you'd rather know than not, right? HB Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PotashRLS Posted April 22, 2009 Report Share Posted April 22, 2009 I foresee an F in your future young man. Not because the paper is poorly written, but because the content will be anathema to a liberal professor. Then you write a follow-up paper on why your professor should pound sand! Can I say that here? William will take care of it if I can't Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stevebeilgard Posted April 23, 2009 Report Share Posted April 23, 2009 that's a great paper, dakota. i suspect you will get a good grade, even though the teacher won't like it. if he's fair, that is. if you get a poor grade, make sure it's published in the school paper, with the grade, and ask for other opinions. keep stirring the pot there, guy. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AceArcher Posted April 23, 2009 Report Share Posted April 23, 2009 Your title reads "Big Government: Like a Monarchy but with a Congress." I assumed you would try to show similarities between big government and Monarchies. However, you seemed to get sucked into a diatrib on the current political, economic and social state of our nation while touching on a thought that America was founded as a theocracy. Looks like this is a low level class so you might get an A for effort. However, you need to try to get your points across in a clearer manner. Talk to you professor about how best to lay out your arguements. Your professor will likely love to help you b/c he will want a dissenting opionion in the class. I went to a private methodist university...there were many different opinions there but most importantly it was a place were people kids were able to figure out there view. Good luck and enjoy college...it is the best time of you life. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wtnhunt Posted April 23, 2009 Report Share Posted April 23, 2009 Got to agree with Chris here Dakota. In the current it is rather hard to follow in some spots, break it down and stick with your points. Might us to help you if you copied it here and edited it to match the format from where you copied it from. Post the final draft if you can. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dakota Posted April 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 23, 2009 Your title reads "Big Government: Like a Monarchy but with a Congress." I assumed you would try to show similarities between big government and Monarchies. However, you seemed to get sucked into a diatrib on the current political, economic and social state of our nation while touching on a thought that America was founded as a theocracy. Looks like this is a low level class so you might get an A for effort. However, you need to try to get your points across in a clearer manner. Talk to you professor about how best to lay out your arguements. Your professor will likely love to help you b/c he will want a dissenting opionion in the class. I went to a private methodist university...there were many different opinions there but most importantly it was a place were people kids were able to figure out there view. Good luck and enjoy college...it is the best time of you life. Thank you for your opinion, but I must correct you in one respect, bud. No where in my paper did I state that we are a Theocracy--quite the contrary, I stated that we are, in fact, a Republic--we are, however, founded on Christian principles that come from the basic Mosaic and Roman code of laws. The title is just supposed to be a clever little piece to draw the reader in and my professor seemed to appreciate it when we went over the rough draft together. Also, I honestly expect to fail as he seems to grade my papers on my opinion not my writing as he has stated in reviews of my work. My first paper he gave me an A-, my second paper I voiced my political beliefs and how I look through a Christian worldview and I received a B- even though he clearly stated that my writing had improved in every respect. Please explain that to me. College is indeed supposed to be a fun and exciting time, but since when are you discouraged from viewing everything through a Christian worldview at a private Christian university? Something doesn't quite add up. Dakota Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hoythunter37 Posted April 23, 2009 Report Share Posted April 23, 2009 Sorry to tell ya Dakota but that is just how things are in college!! Better get used to that. lol But I just dont understand how he can give you a grade on one paper then you write another one better and he gives to a lower grade. Doesnt make sense to me. He must be crazy! lol Good luck with everything man. I hope your teacher comes around and you dont end up with another one like him. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wtnhunt Posted April 23, 2009 Report Share Posted April 23, 2009 Also, I honestly expect to fail as he seems to grade my papers on my opinion not my writing as he has stated in reviews of my work. My first paper he gave me an A-, my second paper I voiced my political beliefs and how I look through a Christian worldview and I received a B- even though he clearly stated that my writing had improved in every respect. Please explain that to me. College is indeed supposed to be a fun and exciting time, but since when are you discouraged from viewing everything through a Christian worldview at a private Christian university? Something doesn't quite add up. Dakota College can be very funny(peculiar) when it comes to such Dakota. Have a few stories I could tell about a particular professor and a humanities class and writing papers. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hoosierbuck Posted April 24, 2009 Report Share Posted April 24, 2009 I have stories from Criminal Procedure in law school. Suffice it to say it was taught by a defense attorney from Detroit, and I have always though like a prosecutor. HB Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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