Re: my story (\"title On Top Of A Ridge\")
Here are my reflections on your story:
1) That is a neat story that I very much enjoyed reading
2) Jimmie and Skyler must be pretty strong to drag the uncle all the way back to the house
3) The uncle got over his heart attack pretty quickly (2 days in the hospital...)
4) Is this all fiction, or is this perhaps based at least in part on a true personal story?
5) An idea for you to "extend" your nice story - the uncle, two boys, and new dogs go back out and harvest the mountain lion and mount his pelt (along with the two slain dogs' collars) over the stone fireplace in their hunting cabin.
6) If you already have 3 such stories, I think you should write some, work with Tominator to "clean them up", and publish an anthology...
Keep up the good work.